Flare Dancer

Best part. That's what I think at least. The voicing was great.

More definition.

A little more definition in the drums. Thats what I would say. Other than that, I loved it. Also maybe some more patches in harmonization towards the end.
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Tibbs

Just a few pointers

I thought the concept was great, but your patches are a little... you know basically the piano was kinda a crappy patch. I felt like it didn't carry out enough. Adding some reverb to it would be helpful to carry it out and make it a little smoother. Other than that I thought it was pretty good friend.
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Tibbs